A.W.W. Part 2 preview 2

Sure that you want these formal (and shared) critiques on material for sale?

Anyway, the "Corporate Assets" and "Downsized" story have had some my favorite original characters of yours so it was fun to see that you had gotten back to them.

Nevada just looked soooo pleased with herself on the cover! It was an interesting effect in having "manon-bot" coming on line what with the grainy and distorted vision she had. I liked the headdress thing she had on, that showed only her face and her mechanical eyes were a nice touch.

Pretty sexy bot appearance for her. So the company wants a private army, eh?

Glad that it was re-established that Manon was the one who wanted to steal the nanotech.

Ana was surprisingly evil in the story! Not quite the same girl who was only interested in the science! Still remaining the redhead it seems. I can see why she'd want revenge on Manon and Michelle, but she seems to be pleased to apply vengeance to everyone else involved. But what will she do when the company she works for is as wicked as some of the perpetrators?

I don't know if it was intentional, but I liked how Ana sort of denigrated Julia's name by calling her "Julie".

Glad to see Michelle again, even if she continued to remain "busted". Sort of a shame as I liked her haplessness as a remote controlled slave to her rival. Well, I can certainly see the appeal to being a trophy in an office, and it was cool to see her talking and responding in that form of truncated body bondage. Certainly sort of spooky, one has to wonder where the rest of her is?

After the long numerical control codes that Michelle had created for the nanomachines, the one that mattered was "M-Power"? Hmn? "M" for "Michelle" or "M" for "M-Theory"? One might speculate if the nanomachines have subatomic string theory mechanics as a basis for how they work?

I sort of miss Michelle as the brilliant, less deviant minded but greedy super-scientist that she first appeared to be in the earlier stages of the story, before Ana appeared. Inventors who get bitten by their own inventions is a fun trope for me, it happened to Michele, and it happened to Ana before her. Story may have gotten more complicated with the addition of more players.

I do like the design of Ana, though.

Adrianna getting made over and shrunk into a doll was good for what it was. But not much to it, but the promise of her being in doll clothes! LoL Also, shrinking scenes done digitally have the problem of resolution issues, close ups on most panels of the ever shrinking Adrianna got increasingly pixilated as a result.

What really made up for it was the work done of Julia. The green force-field effect around her body was really, really cool! And I liked the hex -grid layering over her body as she became an android as well. Overall, I like that design visually better than what was done with Mannon.

If anything, it looked more like a cool "super-tech" outfit, like a sexy, skin-tight "Iron-girl" costume than a "You are a robot", effect. Again, loved the cool "mechanical irises" eye effect that you did for her as well as Mannon.

Great job with the props and backgrounds as well. Love the offices where Mannon and Michele were ensconced, and Ana's lab is pretty cool as well, particularly the platform that Julia was on.